Strangers

cbln said:
I'm a woman and the way you wrote this, I totally bought that she took him in. She's a nurse, she knows how to fix him up, he's hurt, the letter's been opened so she knows what's up. But she can't figure out why he did what he did but she senses that he's not just some thug.

She's actually an interesting character because she's brave enough to take what could be a risk.
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Thanks so much cbln. That is probably the best compliment you could have given me. I tried really hard to make sure she was a believable character, especially to women readers, so your feedback just gave me a huge boost of self esteem.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment, it really means a lot.
 
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