it's a little Becket meets Python- which is very cool.
well played too.
pusher with his kills on the wall---- you can't make that **** up!
crack me up.
dead dog drops outta the sky---- awesome. really too much---- i'm laughing still!
in the bar, the red light does not work.
it's like white- both are bad for video.
avoid at all costs.
in fact, it's worth reshooting that part with the manager/bar owner.
just do that and drop it in place.
then it's TIGHT.
use purple or green, or both. only red as a highlight.
first shot at directing?
kikinass man.
you done good.