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Hey Keith - Not bad, it didn't seem like a trailer though - more like the opening to the movie. I enjoyed it and was ready for the next scene, but what do they say "A trailer is a 2 minute movie spoiler" and you don't have that. You don't give us an idea of what the story is about through what I saw. Like I said good work, but I don't think it's a trailer - more like the first 90 seconds to a feature.
 
Cheers,

i liked the style. But i didn't get the story wether it was a trailer or somehow different.

Garry
 
i agree with jls4, not a trailer more like the opening scene. Theres a couple of spots where the editing needs some work, example: clipping his back pack, remember to cut things like that in mid motion. I suggest re-editing this, good work though, seems interesting.
PS, one thing i personally woulg get rid of is the generic wake up scene, i did it once and will never do it again, thats just my opinion though, if you like it keep it.
 
What shortstop said, the waking up getting ready routine, is honestly, extremely boring, very cliched, show of student work

It says nothing about your film
The quality (don't know if you were going for a style) was real low
There are a lot of short films/trailers you'll find here, wach them, learn from them

Shot composition
Lighting
Editing styles
Overall content
 
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