OTHER: Spy film title sequence

[star striker]

Hello I edited a title sequence for a spy film and am putting it out there to see what people think and also see if anyone has some advice to make the thing look a little more full and rough.

I based it on the jackel and se7en opening credits and just downloaded a few parade scenes from the Internet.
the rest was filmed by me and I editing it on do y Vegas pro 9.

Thanks