"Something Strong" by Chris Jones

nice story loved the message, acting was ok, can't say much for the lighting, most of it seemed pretty flat, not much separation of color, the window was to blown out. nothing can be done about that now.

the audio on the other hand can be fixed, all and all its pretty good, when he turns on the tv the news started way to loud, and the changing of the radio sounded fake it didn't blend well with good audio(all your audio elements are there they just need tweeking) and a good story (which you have) the bland image will be no big deal.

all that said, its a nice film, and a good first draft on the edit. work it out a bit and you'll have a nice little film here.

beyond all this, let me say I enjoyed it. nice job.
 
I like the struggle here. The image can be played with in post. Sound is indeed a problem even for me. For a lot of us actually sound is an issue. Maybe try to add some filters over it.

-Nate
 
it shows talent and love of story telling

too much content -- too rich in Bible quotation

well-executed concept

you have too much talent in relation to what you've been able to achieve with this short

-- move on

don't get stuck in short movie mindset

it's not for you

my 2 cents worth :-)
 
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