Some Grabs from short's ive recently shot

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sideshowlettuce

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Check it out, critique it
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looks nice man.

wha i would do now is give it some nice CC touch of your own in your NLE.

see what you can do to get rid of the video quality.
 
The grabs look pretty nice... although I think the images could POP out a little more. Maybe with some careful CCing you can take care of some of the flatness.

The third grab with the man sleeping seems to have way too much green in the frame; with the blanket and the wall taking your eye away from the talent.

I really do like the last two grabs! Playing with DOF and natural sunlight is fun! Keep at it.
 
yea, the one with the green walls does distract you, the director wanted the shot for 1 real reason, having it framed that way allowed the viewer to see the characters living conditions a bit better, and it showed his suit, which later leads on to the story of how he is a door man, I agree with you though definatly, it takes attention off the talent, the work on the outdoors stuff was done using reflectors. Thanks for the post
 
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