SHORT: 'SOLEIL' and 'DRIZZLE' | minute shorts shot on iPhone5

[AwakenFilms]

Hey guys, I'm Timothy and I just happen to be a 14 year old kid from Indonesia who started filmmaking a few months ago. I have recently learned about Mobile FilmMaking and decided to give it a shot, since I do not own a DSLR at that time ( I do now, the T2i ) and since I was appealed by its versatileness. So, I made 2 minute shorts shot handheld. Please do tell me what you think and how I can improve. I do plan on making shorts using a DSLR in the future, but for now I'm sticking with mobile filmmaking.

SOLIEL
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_EcI9h0xPg




DRIZZLE ---> *apologies for no thumbnail*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8GID9g5NxQ

 

[abreu-canedo]

Good to see such young people making work and putting it out in the world. You have a nice sensibility which can be honed to make some great work. Keep it up!

 

[Justin Kuhn]

The phone helps to simplify things...sort of a Mobile Dogme