Smuggler's Ransom - Teaser Trailer

my internet browser keeps crashing when i want to check this :(

guess it only works on a mac ?
 
Hey, Bricey, sorry, but I couldn't help point it out--you crossed the line in the male react after the blonde actress' line, ". . . unhealthy enjoyment of your work," in that office interior (his eyeline should be screen right, shot from over her left shoulder).
 
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This of course, is totally okay if the line-cross is shown on-camera (e.g., a "hot" dolly move over to her right shoulder).
 
Nice work Briceman! Looks great. The title font was really good, what font is that? Also liked the choice of music.
 
Rezfactor said:
Hey, Bricey, sorry, but I couldn't help point it out--you crossed the line in the male react after the blonde actress' line, ". . . unhealthy enjoyment of your work," in that office interior (his eyeline should be screen right, shot from over her left shoulder).
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Yep... did it on purpose actually... :) Creative choice I guess... you noticed correctly.
 
Overall, it looks good. The only thing that I really didn't like was the light animation going through every single letter. Its just one of those things were when watching it, it just didn't seem right.
 
Yep. gunna fix that, it's been a constant thing for people, not liking it... glad you enjoyed the rest though!
 
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