small short

the edit was way too loose, i could easily tell that you were telling your actors "Go." after pressing record. film more overlapping action so that you can do a tighter edt.
 
why not practice more before blowing all that cash on a camera? Does the school have equipment?

As for the movie, I would capture it into an NLE and edit it down to about 1 minute. 6 minutes is a very long time, especially if its just shots on running through halls. Music would be good too
 
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