DOC: Small Business Saturday

[Psynema]

Quick short I recently did on a local event, any thoughts welcome. Open gate 6K and liked the Hollyland Lark Max 2, most of the environments were noisy and worked out well given live bands and vacuums etc present. Lumix S5IIX, Sigma 24-70mm II mostly, with 16-28 and DJI Flip cameos.

 

[Paul F]

Nice job.

 

[morgan_moore]

I think there is fat to cut.

The ratio and order of showing telling.

I want to
-see artwork
-hear description (while still seeing it)
-maybe have a look at the person once Im intersted in them but only them.

Personally this is gimbal 16mm.. Id be looking to some 50mm shots that isolate the subject

The slide cuts bore after a while

Using a variance of lesing will add ability to do scissor cuts

Also..
-why am I watching this (are you interested in getting to know your local small businesses?)
-it there a call to action (swing by every saturday until christmas to pick up unique gifts)

Edit out 'SO'