Sleeping Fleet (2 min short)

Re: Sleeping Fleet (2 min short)

I really liked the opening couple of shots, especially the wide open landscape, very nice epic look...felt like the beginning to an intense drama of some sort. It started to feel like a slideshow a bit there because the time between transitions was the same.

Generally, I thought the shots were good, these little details that describe the place extremely well. I like.
 
Re: Sleeping Fleet (2 min short)

I think your video looks really nice. Two quick comments:
1) a lot of the shots look TOO still. Without some motion it looks too much like a montage of still photos. I felt a sense of a relief when you cut to the bow shot with the markings on it since you could see some water moving.
2) If you can't find motion somewhere you can always add it (tilt/pan). A few shows were screaming for a tilt (e.g. some of the reflection shots would look great if they slowly tilted up)
One last comment. The titles were hard to read. I think the letters are too close to each other (or maybe the italics just makes it harder to read).
But I want to see more!
 
Re: Sleeping Fleet (2 min short)

Thanks...I saw the slide show thing too, and realized I would have to gather more material with movement. Go figure though, when you want that dull cold looking day...The sun comes out. Titles? maybe I'll cange the font and or it's size. Got to get busy as this will be a gift on christmas day.
 
Re: Sleeping Fleet (2 min short)

Mino, i really like it. Mike is right about the shots looking too still. Try to get some movements in there but over all very nice to watch. Keep it up and feed us more please.
 
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