showroom video

[john818]

hello everyone,i made a video for my cuzines showroom for cars,and their was also bikes doing stunts on the front of the shop,the song is copyright but this was just for fun,im not selling it.here is the video i shot it with my gs250.tell me what you think,its on my myspace so scroll down till you see it.

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=128750440

 

[john818]

i know it sucks but any advice would be very helpfull.thank you

 

[Scott F]

It's good for what it is, which is a video for your cuzines. Lots of cars & bikes, but it needs more ladies! :-Laugh(DBG): Just get out and keep shooting, that's what it's all about.

Maybe you could spice it up with some graphics, like the name of the shop or what the event was? Lower 3rds for the riders?

 

[john818]

that very true,thanks,but im not very good with graphics,but i should have put more time in it lol.anything wrong i did with the editing,or shots.

 

[john818]

is it that bad,lol