Short - Sketch Comedy (Luck'd Out)

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Hey guys, I wanted to share with you a new sketch comedy I just completed called Luck'd Out. Originally it was going to be a web series involving the three main characters Hank, Erwin and Zach but later my team and I decided it would work best as a short sketch.

We shot the film with an HVX200 hooked up to a Redrock Encore Adaptor. As you watch the film, you will see we had a some pretty bad focus problems due to a lack of a monitor. Also some of our lights burnt out half way through the shoot. Technical problems aside I hope your able to apperciate the short and leave some constructive feedback.

No use crying over spilled milk, however Temper Tantrums are encouraged.

Luck'd Out:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ng625WB01Tc
 
Indeed a lot of the shots are buzzed. The angles got a bit confusing too, 180 degree rule?
The audio is too hot; the yellow shirt is clipping sometimes.
 
Hey thanks for taking the time to watch the film I really appreciate it! Also thanks for offering your criticism. It would be really helpful if you would tell me where I violated the 180 degree rule and what shots you found confusing so that in my next film I can correct this.
 
At the table, which is most of it. The camera starts at the end of the table where the blue shirt sits. Yellow shirt on the right, beard on the left. Most of the dialog is shot from this perspective. So when the blue shirt enters and blocks the camera, the medium shots with all three of them and shots of the blue shirt involve moving the camera to the other end of the table.
 
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