marlontorres
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Got hired to DP af romantic comedy feature in New Orleans. Here's a little clip from it.
Short scene from a film I'm DPing
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marlontorres
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Please feel free to comment.
Well it isn't too bad.
The lighting is pretty flat all around. I would've tried to shape the light a little more.
There really isn't a whole lot of movement with the camera. I would've like to see a master shot of the both of them on a dolly very slowly moving back and forth. But that is a personal choice.
Not a fan of the pan. Maybe put the camera on a slider next time and put a foreground element in frame and do a reveal. But again that is just my opinion.
Not to shabby though. Hope the rest of the shooting goes well.
The lighting is pretty flat all around. I would've tried to shape the light a little more.
There really isn't a whole lot of movement with the camera. I would've like to see a master shot of the both of them on a dolly very slowly moving back and forth. But that is a personal choice.
Not a fan of the pan. Maybe put the camera on a slider next time and put a foreground element in frame and do a reveal. But again that is just my opinion.
Not to shabby though. Hope the rest of the shooting goes well.
marlontorres
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Red One.
thisisapocalypse
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Assuming this has been graded? Curious what it looked like prior to grading, if it indeed, has been.
Agreed - the pan's gotta go.
I don't mind the camera not moving, I think performances were pretty good here, composition is good although I think I'd like to get a tad bit tighter. The composition feels more TV than a film. Not bad, but I feel like there's a tad too much negative space.
Agreed - the pan's gotta go.
I don't mind the camera not moving, I think performances were pretty good here, composition is good although I think I'd like to get a tad bit tighter. The composition feels more TV than a film. Not bad, but I feel like there's a tad too much negative space.