Short Piece - Hands Up Close - Nikon 50mm1.8, Tamron 70-200mm2.8

TheReverend

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This was shot and edited in one day. The concept and script was put together the day before. All shots are AF100. Shot as super flat as possible, and graded to match.I'm really fond of this piece. One of the first truly cinematic-style pieces I've done where the camera work really pushes to tell the story.
http://vimeo.com/25740233
 
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This is that was shot and edited in one day. The concept and script was put together the day before. All shots are AF100. Shot as super flat as possible, and graded to match.

I'm really fond of this piece. One of the first truly cinematic-style pieces I've done where the camera work really pushes to tell the story.

Hi,

Nice work. A nice shot of some people at the end would have helped to bring closure to the piece, I think, but it was good nevertheless.
 
Something else i believe could have made this piece even more powerful is if you would have had people of different ethnicities writing some words and when the writer changed the voice over matched whom ever would be speaking rather than the same voice throughout... nice look tho
 
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