Short Film " The Hotel Room

Didn't make it through.

It's hard to catch my interest, so don't be hurt.

I've never critiqued a video before like this, but i'll try it:

Lighting: 7/10
Superb at the beginning, then was a bit dark after that.

Camera work: 9/10
Great job on that, nice composition here.

Sound: 4/10
It was clear, but to low. Could barely hear them.

Editing: 8.5/10
Great job on the editing.

Acting: 9/10
Acting was nice.

Story: ?/10
Don't really know. I got bored so I can't really judge it.

All together, it looks nice from what I saw (about first 3 minutes or so)

Good job.
 
some of the images were just beautiful, great job! care to share your settings/techniques?
 
thank you so much guys. well i just used the dvx100b and that's it. i had the letus35fe but didn'T use it because i didn'T had enough lights. i guess it's more a outside ,day kind of adapter. i use the shotgun mic. fix the audio because of the vibration in the room. in the beginning. i've used after effect for the title. i'Ve just used the levels options. put a big 500w on her face and that's it. the songs was from RIM of france and the keyboard of shamrain . he did a song for me . it was so great
 
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