Short Film "Nick"

[Johnny Swanepoel]

Hi All

I am new to film making. Have a look at this and let me know what you think. Film was shot on no budget at all. This is an incident that creates the story. I wrote, directed and edited the film.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eqdK0eU8RU0

Thanks

Johnny

 

[clipsmoke]

dude...im not a crazy detail freak...but the lighting in there was bad. and the crying looked like a crakced smile.. but the main thing is the lighting.

 

[Johnny Swanepoel]

was my first. the film was shot on top of a mountain with no power and no budget at all. so the lighting i definitely know about. my next film will most definitely be different. thanks for the comments. keep rolling them please. I am learning.

 

[Johnny Swanepoel]

hey guys. what you think of the film?

 

[murraymile]

wow. I'm blown away.

 

[Johnny Swanepoel]

any critics on acting, directing, cinematography etc would really be appreciated.

thanks all

 

[Johnny Swanepoel]

Hi all

I am making a sequel to my last film. I would appreciate it if anyone can tell me their thoughts as to what I need to look at in my next film. Lighting is for sure 1 I need to look at.

With Kind Regards

Johnny