SHORT: Short Film 'Myth of Freedom'

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Jacob.Hamby

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I've actually been on DVXuser for quite some time (formerly Bonedog) but I've just re-registered so I could drop the alias for my name. Anyhow, I've just completed this short film and would appreciate some feedback.

This being my first live action short, I was mostly determined to simply make a film that was watchable, unlike a lot of the student/amateur projects I've seen. I'm well aware of numerous weaknesses in the film, but I think it is at least coherent. Tell me what you think.

 
hmmm, I didn't understnd it? haha, just kiddin It was good, I think you cut it in an easy to understand way. The one thing I didn't get, was how did that fall completely rip the entire sleeve of his shirt off?
 
That was just one of a few continuity errors. The sleeve was supposed to be rolled up, but this was the last shoot we had and the sun was going down so everything was pretty high speed.
 
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