Heartsbane00
Member
Hey guys,
I was just wondering what you thought of this short film, more like a sitcom, I shot. Any advice or input is wanted. Thanks. Hope to hear from you.
Also, I am not a child and can handle harsh reviews/opinions.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BswARAFAN1M&feature=channel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgsSy1_7-2c&feature=channel
Specifically I am looking to see if even though the film is 15 minutes long, it holds the viewers attention. I know there are issues with some of the cinematography and the overall look even in my opinion is subpar/okay. I tried to shoot it a little dark, but in a sitcom type of fashion which in my opinion separates film and TV. Right now I am more focused on story arc, but any other input towards what was done poorly or well would really help me in focus on what I need to work on. I already decided to lose the scene where Jackson gets a call from the kidnapper. I just need to reupload it. I hope to hear from anyone and everyone interested in helping me break down my work. I am critical of myself, but I still need the input of other users who are more knowledgable than I.
I was just wondering what you thought of this short film, more like a sitcom, I shot. Any advice or input is wanted. Thanks. Hope to hear from you.
Also, I am not a child and can handle harsh reviews/opinions.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BswARAFAN1M&feature=channel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgsSy1_7-2c&feature=channel
Specifically I am looking to see if even though the film is 15 minutes long, it holds the viewers attention. I know there are issues with some of the cinematography and the overall look even in my opinion is subpar/okay. I tried to shoot it a little dark, but in a sitcom type of fashion which in my opinion separates film and TV. Right now I am more focused on story arc, but any other input towards what was done poorly or well would really help me in focus on what I need to work on. I already decided to lose the scene where Jackson gets a call from the kidnapper. I just need to reupload it. I hope to hear from anyone and everyone interested in helping me break down my work. I am critical of myself, but I still need the input of other users who are more knowledgable than I.
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