Short Creek Documentury Trailer

Don,

That looks really darn good, brother. Really looks like a great documentary. How far along in production are you? Got distribution lined up?

It looks like something I'd like to see.. and really does make me want to see more. Good job and looks interesting. I really loved that Waco PBS doc, control room, the couple of anti-Iraq war docs and all that jazz..

Looks like something that needs to find a home and I'm sure you'll have some interest. Could you explain a bit more of the situation at hand.. That's the only thing that I was unsure of.

The only additional thing I would comment upon would be to include a few more terse and intense.. especially physical and or violent altercations if you have them... If they aren't too phsyical.. you can spice them up with cutting... some video effects and certainly with intesnse sound design. That's all I would really add.. just some spice and some eye candy if you have it.

When you get ready to screen more or the whole thing.. or want a guinea pig.. let me know. Looks really awesome and thanks for showing it all off..

Wish you the best of luck, brother!
 
Looks great.. But I really don't know exactly what it's about.. What are these people getting arrested for? What law are they breaking.. A bit more about a specific would really drive the point of the doc to people like myself who are unfamilier with this specific topic..

Shot in DVCPRO HD?

Music is perfect! Images great!

I WANT MORE :-)

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Justin
 
it looked good, but was kinda confusing. i read your post on the subject matter, but the trailer seemed like it was more about police harrassment and that warren jeff was in control of the city/town.

i think the trailer was good in terms of showing conflict between a community and the police. But it seemed like the police illegaly harrassing them.

So looks good, shows conflict, but who is warren jeff is not clear. i don't watch tv so i haven't seen cnn.
 
I'd Love to Watch this Documentary

I'd Love to Watch this Documentary

The trailer is really compelling. Great shots and music. Looks like something I'd expect to see on A&E or Discovery. Great work.

Seamus
 
I'll put my name on that list for a screening for sure. Are you planning to go the aweful festival route? cable distribution? DVD? online?


If this is in the current news and on the the top 10 list... then your story might not yet be written. It's almost this now.. the worse it is for these people.. the worse it is for this nation... for our viewing airwaves the better it will be for your doc. Drama is your friend....

What was that waco doc called again? Was super frigging cool..
 
very professional. I too wished it had been more clear on what it was about. You get the jist, but not quite enough. The dramatic tension during the moment the policeman asks the guy to stop filming was powerful. I just looked at the clip a second time and it became much more clear to me. Nice work. The quality differences in the footage is quite noticable, but I guess that's because you told us you did it with the dvx and hvx and I was looking for it. congratulations
 
Thanks bro. Wish you the best. This is something that looks really fab. We'll be able to say.. we know ya when.....


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