short car profile video

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ProjectThangsombat

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I wanted to get everyone's opinion on this short video I made.
I wanna fine tune it as much as possible. Lemme know what you think because every little bit helps.


its 173mb so please be patient.

http://diewit.com/kevin/NakturnylEKprofileWeb.mov (right click save as)

here is a streamed version if you don't want to download:
http://www.vimeo.com/409342



here are some screenshots from it

car.jpg

valvecover.jpg

wheel.jpg
 
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Seemed a bit flat and underexposed. The fast paced stuff also seems to come too late and maybe would be nice to have that spread throughout otherwise you have a kind of one note/flat piece without much excitment. The talent also needs a big smack... but that's just me showing my age and all of that... J/K on the smack unless it helps the young lad out...
 
Justyn said:
Seemed a bit flat and underexposed. The fast paced stuff also seems to come too late and maybe would be nice to have that spread throughout otherwise you have a kind of one note/flat piece without much excitment. The talent also needs a big smack... but that's just me showing my age and all of that... J/K on the smack unless it helps the young lad out...
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point well taken
 
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