short animation: The Pen

[JimtheJib]

this is a short animation i did. I made it for a contest. the theme was "magic wands". there is a watermark on the footage because i compressed it using the sorenson squeeze trial version, just ignore that and enjoy the film...

Tell me what you think:



http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_upload/uploads/THE%20PEN%20FINAL%20VERSIONLg_Prog.mov

 

[JimtheJib]

...anybody?

 

[marlenedegrood]

I think you were very creative with the animation. I just didn't care for the subject, it kinda creeped me out.

 

[Shawn Murphy]

Not bad, a little strange for sure, I think it would have benefited greatly had you either did the sound on location or ensured the reverb/room settings matched the location setting, though just tweaking the reverb wouldn't have captured the ambient street noise. If it sounded like it was on an actual street it would have drawn me in to the story much more.