SHORT: Short about beauty of life

nycineaste said:
so much gorgeous imagery- really amazing

what a boring generic concept for a movie tho-- zzzzzzz

if youre gonna keep making short non-story stuff like this maybe you can study the history of "poetic"/avante-garde cinema, get some ideas

great cinematography tho

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t2EpQ028vjI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8pe8O5h9EEs
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Thank you nycineaste,

I don't know what I'm going to do and where I'm going.
I do not care too much about classification, trends and canons of art.
Some new ideas are ok, always welcome :) Thank you
Fortunately I feel free to do something from the heart and I'm "rich" enough to realize it.
I'm happy if you like it. If you don't like, I'm still happy.

Greetings from Poland ;)
 
I liked it, but i'm a sucker for great imagery + killer narration.

My two suggestions:

It should be much shorter. It drags a bit in the middle. If you are trying to express how beautiful and wonderful life is, you don't want to at the same time in some way suggest that life is boring by boring the audience.

Don't ever tell someone, "hey watch this short film about the beauty of life". All it will do is make people roll their eyes. Just present it as is, you don't need to explain yourself. Let the film do the explaining for you.
 
jghenderson said:
I liked it, but i'm a sucker for great imagery + killer narration.

My two suggestions:

It should be much shorter. It drags a bit in the middle. If you are trying to express how beautiful and wonderful life is, you don't want to at the same time in some way suggest that life is boring by boring the audience.

Don't ever tell someone, "hey watch this short film about the beauty of life". All it will do is make people roll their eyes. Just present it as is, you don't need to explain yourself. Let the film do the explaining for you.
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Thank you jghenderson for your time and attansion. Maybe next time I'm going to take advantage of your suggestions.
Greetings ... ;)
 
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