FEATURE: SHORT (27 min) My first attempt at producing and directing narrative/fiction

[silyn]

Here is the link to my first short feature film:
http://vimeo.com/87635421
It's not yet final cut, but close enough so that I though I would share it - I am looking for feedback: positive and negative in particular.

Thanks,

Serge

 

[Andrew C]

Looks like you took it down? Good luck with your project anyhoo

 

[silyn]

Looks like you took it down? Good luck with your project anyhoo

Oops. Sorry. I thought i replaced it after making some changes in credits, but it turns out it's a new submission. New URL:

https://vimeo.com/87881901

Please comment and critique.

Serge