"SHE"
- Thread starter MDfilms
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Chris Messineo
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Re: "SHE"
Great job. I loved most of it, there were just a few things that didn't work for me.
Most of your shots were amazing, some real special stuff, my favorite shot is of the humming birds through the window. But then a few of your other shots seemed very ordinary and
flat, like the couple at the table or them drinking a beer on the deck.
With the efx it was the same, there is a shot about halfway through where there appears to be ripples of water in the wood which is truly beautiful. But then shots like the flames seemed sort of tacked on and uneccesary.
Lastly, there were some shots that seemd to be purposely very out of focus, but I found those just distracting.
I guess, I think you have a really beautiful music video in there, I would just play with the edit some more. Once again, great work, congratulations,
Chris
Great job. I loved most of it, there were just a few things that didn't work for me.
Most of your shots were amazing, some real special stuff, my favorite shot is of the humming birds through the window. But then a few of your other shots seemed very ordinary and
flat, like the couple at the table or them drinking a beer on the deck.
With the efx it was the same, there is a shot about halfway through where there appears to be ripples of water in the wood which is truly beautiful. But then shots like the flames seemed sort of tacked on and uneccesary.
Lastly, there were some shots that seemd to be purposely very out of focus, but I found those just distracting.
I guess, I think you have a really beautiful music video in there, I would just play with the edit some more. Once again, great work, congratulations,
Chris
