Shalloween

Seems pretty obvious to me that it was about an annoying party boy crashing his friend's sophisticated party...HILARIOUS. I laughed all through this one. I dig humor way more than blood and guts, and while I didn't see the darkness theme in there, I didn't really care. It was really funny :)
 
Obviously not dark, pretty darn light as a matter of fact.

I liked it though. When the guy chugs his wine then throws the wine glass, unexpected and very funny. If this was Comedy Fest you might have a winner!
 
Dude, nice. I was pretty annoyed until the guy said "it's pronounced Shawn." Super clever. I laughed out loud. Looks like you hade some fun with that one.
Listen to your audio with headphones and try to blend it a bit better. The audio should never even be noticed if it is done right...
 
Hey Duff,

Pretty funny. It was shot pretty well and I thought the dialogue and acting was good. I thought there should have been a lot more payoff in the end like the party being something really dark and spooky like they were going to sacrifice animals or kill Shawn or something and his friend telling him,"I told you this wasn't your type of party." Or something along those lines. Probably could have been a little tighter. Overall it was decent, but it didn't really have a payoff.

Laters,
Ando
 
I had a good laugh watching this. Good job. It did as you say miss the darkness theme.

I thought the sound (aside from the ADR) and the lighting were better than the average short. A little music might have pepped this up a bit.

I thought the Shawn character was great.

Nice job!
 
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