fabiorocker
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Hello everybody, this is my second shortfilm, I want to know what do you think about it, I hope you like it 
SHORT: Senza cuore - heartless
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jghenderson
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I like the style you're going for here. It's paced very well and has a nice mood to it.
My complaints are much the same as they were for your other film. The biggest issue with this one is the sound. It instantly kills the credibility of the film.
The cinematography was better in this one than in your other one, but the color really bothered me on occasion. The biggest issue is the way overblown exteriors. I actually thought it worked in the beginning, but once he goes outside it becomes painful to watch.
Also from a story point, I didn't really understand the significance of the cell phone ringing at the end.
The abandoned location you got for this piece was awesome by the way!
My complaints are much the same as they were for your other film. The biggest issue with this one is the sound. It instantly kills the credibility of the film.
The cinematography was better in this one than in your other one, but the color really bothered me on occasion. The biggest issue is the way overblown exteriors. I actually thought it worked in the beginning, but once he goes outside it becomes painful to watch.
Also from a story point, I didn't really understand the significance of the cell phone ringing at the end.
The abandoned location you got for this piece was awesome by the way!