ScreenGrabs of Upcoming Short!!

[PeckDun]

Here are some screengrabs of my upcoming short "Love and Lost". It's a drama about a couple that breaks up and what follows. No CC, Just a very little level...

I would love to here what you guys think.... The good but mostly the bad as I am
always looking to improve....
Thanx...

 

[novelt]

well i personally have no bad...except i'd like to see a clip! looks good though, but there's more to production than stills so if you can post a clip that would be great.

 

[ShamrockFilms]

#1
I think if the lighting was a little brighter emphasizing the shadows and bringing out the whites of his eyes, it'd be a better shot. Its a bit flat looking now.

#2
Top notch

#3
Innovative.

#4
Dull. Under lit. This would of been a great opportunity to come in closer and DOF with the railing.

#5
Framing is off. Looks like you're using a anamorphic lens? there's too much space on the right. I'd of came in closer on the shot unless you had a cool decoration on the wall behind her. I also would have used a room that didn't have white walls.

#6
Good framing and average lighting but its a bit orange.

 

[Robbie Comeau]

nice, but ya the lasty one is a bit orange

 

[PeckDun]

Thanx guys, Yea the orange is actually a look I was going for.. A warm look to contrast the break-up the couple is going through.. I went with gels instead of doing it in post.. I just wanted to try something different and I thought it would look interesting.. But lighting overall is quite a b!*ch, as I am learning.. I will post a clip soon, I'm still filming so.. But thanks for the kind words and priceless critiques.. As soon as I have a clip or even a trailer I will look forward to more.. Thanx again.