Screen Grabs from PSA

not bad. It's just a tad bit slow for a 60 second spot. You could cut it down to a 30 with no problem.

I liked the crane shots.

The girl, when she's looking disgusted, almost looks like a totally different person. I actually squibed back just to make sure it was the same girl.

Might want to bump up the dialog from the guy a little.

Good job.
 
Thanks for the input. I too feel like the edits could be tightened up a bit.

I will keep all of this in mind during the next round of edits.
 
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