Saturday Films - DVX + Redrock M2

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Any film in particular you would like critiqued?

In general, I found the lighting to be quite solid and audio was acceptable most of the time. But the camera direction and editing could use some work.
 
Thanks for the input, salils. I agree that they're a little rough around the edges. I'm really doing this as a learning exercise, trying to push out a lot of ideas as quickly as possible and get some eyeballs on them. Kinda like sketches.

Any feedback is welcome and appreciated, however.
 
Im pretty new to shooting however I wanted to give you a quick two cents worth. Sure some areas, not all, may look around the edges but I think you are doing great. To improve you may consider doing shorter pieces and thus focusing on your angle shots and the movement between two people; over the shoulder shots, etc., capturing more drama in the facial expressions, closeups, zoom outs (just a little here and there), adding in drama with sounds.. footsteps, etc.

Are these shoots working towards a whole... Overall great job for just getting started. Im impressed by the way you are just jumping in!! Keep up the great work and keep sharing.
 
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