I wish everything had been black and white, aside from maybe the shots in front of the large bank of lights.
My biggest complaint is that there doesn't seem to be much of a story. I'm not sure why the guy is opening the freezer or just sitting there. There doesn't have to be a story in the traditional sense, but the actions should more reflect the mood and meaning of the piece.
Also, never ever use the font Papyrus, especially for a video like this. It instantly cheapens the video.
Well i know a graphic designer so i just always get them to do my text.... I believe they use indesign or photoshop.
By the way, I forgot to mention that I actually did like the video! I realized I didn't mention that in my last post. It has a really cool, almost hazy atsmosphere to it. The shots in front of that big bank of lights look fantastic.