Rough Draft Of a Rap Video

[n2ition]

Please take a look at this and tell me what you think. I just filmed one verse of the song just to test out my new dvx100b . Obvious, however i think tastefull, use of magic bullet for cc. I also did the production on the song. Lemme know what you think of all or any of it. Thanks.




http://www.filewire.com/download.php?id=d228b14b1c6b71921fb6cce




Brandon Riley aka N2ition

 

[ryan brown]

Looks good. Love the opening shot (green background)... didn't like the shot at 00:22 seconds. He blends into the scene too much.

 

[DwooD]

yeah man its a good track. cant wait to see more, i think there could be some more cut aways but besides that it all looks good and u did say it was a test shoot so yeah looks good to me man

 

[vicnewton]

Looks good man.... Looking forward to watch the final draft..

 

[n2ition]

thanks for watching , if you like the music check out myspace.com/lastdisciplesc


also check that if you dont feel like waiting on filewire's slow download speed. its in the videos section of that myspace page. any criticism is welcomed.

 

[n2ition]

bump.