Rough Cut of Short Film

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I posted rough-cut of a few scenes from my short film; a 25min. comedy.

It doesn't include a 3 min. cartoon that is b4 the live-action; also hasn't gone through sound-editing yet:

http://www.vimeo.com/20542272

Password: daisy

Thoughts?

 

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If you think this is the best thing ever filmed, then don't reply...