DOC: Revenge on Bird Island! - A heart pounding roller coaster thrill ride

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Googlyelmo

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Hey all,

i recently posted part 1 of a reality documentaries series. This is part to in a 2 part sage in which we set forth against the birds to prove our worth as man.


the whole concept is part of an adventure we went on this last summer...the doc will summarize all the bizarre things we attempted....

thanks

let me know what ye thinks
 
I don't think people understand the concept. If it's a comedy it does bring a chuckle, but nothing all that funny. If this is a serious doc then I expected some kind of dangerous attacking birds. Shooting fireworks at a random group of perched birds isn't all that exciting and certainly not thrilling. And "Bird Island" doesn't seem all that special.

I thought when you shot the fireworks the birds were going to attack or something. They just flew away. If the birds teamed up and started chasing you guys or something that would be exciting, watching you have to hide out and get away from the birds with no guns and having to make weapons or something to try and survive. Then you'd have some kind of story. The two guys talking look like straight stoners, which is somewhat funny if that's the direction this is going, but there's no real gags or nothing like that. Them talking is an okay lead in, but not hilarious.

-Nate
 
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ahha yes the title was misleading....

it is a very tongue in cheek style i would agree...

and as for your point of the video having no point....i totally agree

this is a real life situation that we just did one morning.....nuthin' special....yet....


and as for the 2 guys being stoners, i would agree ahahhaha

thanks
 
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