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lynx

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Hello,

I just finished a commercial for a restaurant in Boston.
Tell me guys, what do you think?

Thank you.
 
Looks like one of those commercials you see on the tv of a hotel room in vegas.
Just need one of those women commentators.
 
for these types of commercials i want to see what it looks like inside, what the food looks like, and the type of atmosphere the place has. i don't really care for shots of the staff doing stuff like bringing out food. also, some of the laughter towards the end seemed fake.
 
This is a second and short version of the commercial.
The first version is 5 min long and it shows Food, (Plenty of dishes) Wine, Somelier, Ambience, Patrons, Kitchen in action etc.. And narrated by the owner.
So i keep this version short and web friendly.

Ugafan. Actually the laughter towards the end, wasn't fake. She's a reel patron, she was not cast. Just little shy (the guy too) about me jumping on front of them with the camera.

Thank you all for the feedback.
 
The shot the hostess in the beginning is really bad, not the camera work but her, she looks very uncomfortable. There's a few others like that too i remove, but for a first cut, it's not all that bad.
 
Music and editing didn't work for me. Music seemed to clash with the visuals - I think a different choice of music would be better. And the editing was very, very pat and boring - pacing and tempo need to keep up the interest, not make you wish to switch the channel. Just giving honest feedback.
 
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