red flower

[surf]

http://www.smart.atw.hu/dolgok/redf.html

what do you think of this short?

 

[surf]

Does anybody have an opinion?

 

[mcshyd]

brutal

 

[Amerikan123]

ok, to start. What the **** is your problem, that was revolting. Secondly, your filming, audio, and actors all blew, and i know that wasnt a DVX that was filmed with. That stop motion at the end was poorly done. overall crap. and i feel dirty for having watched it

 

[surf]

and what is your problem with the filming and the audio?

 

[SilverWolf]

I just finished watching the movie
and Overall it looks like a edited home movie

The part where the bike crashes is weird because it seems like you used a car screeching sfx for a bicycle
The blood on the cloth looks like ketchup mixed with betadine
Also why does everyone have this slinky walk to them ?

I really didn't understand what the purpose of the movie was ,but I did like the shot of the door closing I thought that was good
If this was your first short I would say it was ok and a good learning experience.

 

[surf]

yes, because it is a nearly zero cost home movie.
it is interesting, beacuse the sfx for the bike crash was recorded from the bike.
the blood is mix of ketchup and some other ingeredients, but not betadine.

it was made a year ago.

 

[J.R. Hudson]

I thought it interesting enough to finish the short and intriguing; not 'Too Bad'

 

[SilverWolf]

The problem with the Bike Crash Sfx is that most screeches in movies are from cars and for vehicles. Now if you showed a ECU of the back bike wheel braking and sliding then it would help. I found when making blood that you need something to make it redder if using ketchup. Keep on working at it because the only way to learn how to make movies is to make movies

P.S what was the story / plot of the movie?

 

[surf]

we have shot the audio and the video for the bike crash sceen at the same time, but the pic. did not success

 

[SilverWolf]

but the pic. did not success

I don't understand?

 

[David Jimerson]

ok, to start. What the poo poo is your problem, that was revolting. Secondly, your filming, audio, and actors all blew, and i know that wasnt a DVX that was filmed with. That stop motion at the end was poorly done. overall crap. and i feel dirty for having watched it

Let's moderate our criticism a little, shall we? You don't need to be so antagonistic about it.

 

[surf]

the lighting was not good and I could not correct it later.