Hello again DVXers,
I recently shot this subject for a corporate video. Most of the work I do is based in motion graphics, so lighting and setting up a shoot are not my primary skills. Therefore, I'm looking for some advice from some of the more seasoned professionals on this board.
I used a 3 point setup. Two lowell totas for the key and fill, and a pro for the backlight.
What areas of these images stick out as undesirable?

These are the two angles that were shot.
Thanks so much everyone!
I recently shot this subject for a corporate video. Most of the work I do is based in motion graphics, so lighting and setting up a shoot are not my primary skills. Therefore, I'm looking for some advice from some of the more seasoned professionals on this board.
I used a 3 point setup. Two lowell totas for the key and fill, and a pro for the backlight.
What areas of these images stick out as undesirable?


These are the two angles that were shot.
Thanks so much everyone!