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Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

i thought the acting was pretty great. good job.
 
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Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

I think this is a little heavy on the # of cuts. In the first half, the jumps from MCU to CU seem kind of arbitrary, but the cuts and pace improve at the end.
 
Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

the acting is great, I think if you 'flipped' the shots horizontally of O/S shots of the bald guy in your editing program so that his eye line is to the right it would become much less distracting.
 
Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

Can somebody please explain the 180 degree rule? Or point me in the right direction where I can learn more about it? Thanks guys!
 
Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

very tense. breaking the rules bothered me. but like Barry mentioned it added to the scene- and it was no big deal.
 
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Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene(REVISED!)

I noticed a couple problems that have already been discussed (needs to have lighting adjusted to separate actor and background a little more; dialogue sync is off now and then). Also, the color was just a touch too "pink" for my taste, giving it too much of a video look. However, I did not notice the line being crossed--I'll have to watch again. I think the main reason I didn't notice that was because the peformances were just so astounding, and the framing of the shots was very good. I want to see more!
 
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Re: The Cheat: 1:30 second scene...

where is this movie short you'all are talking about?? I don't see a link to it. Thanks.
 
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