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Lucky Duck
Re: Bonus Movie for Enhanced CD
I'm sorry this is your first post and you've gotten no responses.
My own opinion is that it needs a lot of editing. You could easily edit it down to 30 seconds and still get most of the same feel. Also, try to do some interesting things in the edit itself, maybe a choppier style or synched with the music better.
As it is right now, it just goes on and on and the shots you have chosen, although different, are very repetitive. There are also major white balance issues in a bunch of the shots. I don't know if you intended that but they just don't look good to me.
Anyway, try posting something shorter and I'm sure you will get more responses.
Keep working at it
I'm sorry this is your first post and you've gotten no responses.
My own opinion is that it needs a lot of editing. You could easily edit it down to 30 seconds and still get most of the same feel. Also, try to do some interesting things in the edit itself, maybe a choppier style or synched with the music better.
As it is right now, it just goes on and on and the shots you have chosen, although different, are very repetitive. There are also major white balance issues in a bunch of the shots. I don't know if you intended that but they just don't look good to me.
Anyway, try posting something shorter and I'm sure you will get more responses.
Keep working at it
