SHORT: RC car drifting. A submission to a film contest. Please critique!!

I really enjoyed it. If I had to nitpick I would say it does seem to lack a bit of narrative flow. It's mostly just cool shots of the car doing things. While it's very well made I would suggest next time to try to amp up the stakes more as the video progresses.

Also, don't lie. There's no way you operated the camera AND drove the cars!
 
I enjoyed it. You got a sense of humor that comes out.
Suggestions? Maybe shoot on height with subject a bit more. Most are on level.
Biggest bang for the buck would be to add story. Show a race, show competetion. Bring them to life more.
The elevator scene did just that.
 
I enjoyed it man! Did you just set the camera up, hit record, and then controlled the car yourself? Did you have to do anything compositing? If so, how much of it was real vs CG?
 
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