Rich Mbariket
Carbonite Member
Shot hand-held/wheel chair on a shoe-string budget. I welcome your comments!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fiipRrKmjNs
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Rate My New Music Video
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ryan brown
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Rate it?? honestly... I'd give it a 4-5 on a 1-10.
I'm liking the train shots, and some of the compositions are interesting, but it's just SO repetitive... which leads to boring. Almost every single shot is just this girls face/upper body singing the song.
Give me some establishing shots, b-roll, detailed closeups, and just all over shots of the subway and it's people. I think that would help break it up a bit, and add interest (which it very much needs).
Not meaning to be harsh, but those are my initial reactions to it. Good luck, and keep shooting.
-brown
p.s. Youtube really butchered that one.
I'm liking the train shots, and some of the compositions are interesting, but it's just SO repetitive... which leads to boring. Almost every single shot is just this girls face/upper body singing the song.
Give me some establishing shots, b-roll, detailed closeups, and just all over shots of the subway and it's people. I think that would help break it up a bit, and add interest (which it very much needs).
Not meaning to be harsh, but those are my initial reactions to it. Good luck, and keep shooting.
-brown
p.s. Youtube really butchered that one.
disasianluvsangie
Active member
Agreed.
At first I was like, alright cool location, cool open, and we just kept on seeing the same thing. I didn't really like the whole choppy zoom to her mouth either. That was weird.
And was the lip sync off or what?
Good try though.
At first I was like, alright cool location, cool open, and we just kept on seeing the same thing. I didn't really like the whole choppy zoom to her mouth either. That was weird.
And was the lip sync off or what?
Good try though.