Rap Vid shot in Raleigh

Looks interesting

Looks interesting

I'm not one to criticize, so I'll be honest...
The video is well shot but not interesting... I get the Elite Hunting parallel but don't get the correlation to Bang...
Khrysis has done better beats, and much better rhymes have come out of the Justus League and the Hall, but you did a good job with the source material.
Watch your continuity, you have him put on his pants before his shirt, but the in the pants shot the shirt is already on and then cuts to the wifebeater. There is no drama in her face, no fear, no need. Vary your shots and redirect your actors to create drama when you don't have technology to cover certain "sins"
Good Job!
 
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