QUICK FIX - short film

I was amused. Liked some of the shots. Did notice the shadow of the camera in one shot though (which you're probably aware of) when the multiplex manager was ranting toward the end. I think it could have been cut together a bit tighter, seemed to lag a bit. And music would've helped. But overall not too shabby, and like I said, I was amused. Where abouts in San Diego are you? (fellow San Diegan)

Oh hey, I've modified this post to add on some: I watched some of your other videos on YouTube, and I REALLY LOVED "Gone". Everything, the pace, the look, those dolly moves and what looks like the use of a 35mm adapter. The feel of the whole thing was perfect, it all worked together really well I think. Rock on.
 
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