PUNCHED in the Face - A Short Film

j.nguyen

j.nguyen

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Hey everyone!

This is the first actual project i shot since I got my sgpro adapter. It's a comedic short film, about well you can probably guess from the title. Give it a gander and let me know what you think. I'm still trying to smooth it over a little so plz do let me know if you have any suggestions.

- Justin


http://www.vimeo.com/3048000


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I found the banter pretty entertaining, it kept my attention. Up until about 4:19 when it became hilarious. Good job, man.
 
Nice job, The suggestion i could give would be to work a bit on your audio...using J or L even just to make the cuts not quite a jarring, and equalizing levels. Other than that, Fantastic!
 
OpticSugar said:
Nice job, The suggestion i could give would be to work a bit on your audio...using J or L even just to make the cuts not quite a jarring, and equalizing levels. Other than that, Fantastic!
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I agree. I had my speakers on full on my laptop and found it hard a few times to hear the audio.

Wasn't that keen on the first time he punched him in the face, maybe just the way it was shot.

It looked great in the restaurant, really well shot and the lighting was good. I'd try and cut the film down by say a minute to make it more punchy. The ending was fun made me laugh.

Good work...
 
pekar1876 said:
I agree. I had my speakers on full on my laptop and found it hard a few times to hear the audio.
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Yea the audio would have been better but I didn't have anyone to man a boom, I'm surprised how well it went seeing how i just ran the mic in a shotgun fashion. It was just me and my friend, who were on camera, shooting between classes in our cafeteria at school. haha talk about skeleton crew. I'll try to bump and smooth over the audio, thanks for the input!
 
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