Public Service Announcements

[ProfessorU]

I just finished some zero-budget PSAs for a client in my area, and I'd like to submit them for some college-level awards. I'm trying to decide which one looks the best and has the best chance. Any feedback is welcome, but in particular I'd like to know which one you would submit.
There are four from two different scripts.
http://vimeo.com/5175550

 

[ProfessorU]

Bump.

 

[ProfessorU]

Hello? Where did everybody go?

 

[jbednarski]

The first one is the best written and most structured in my opinion. Looks very professional. You should get paid for this much work!

 

[ProfessorU]

Thanks! It was through the college, so pay wasn't an option, but that means it's eligible for more awards.

 

[PerroneFord]

I liked the last one best. Clean camera moves, good lighting, nice titling, nice voice over. They were all quite good to be honest but I felt the camera movements in the last 2 were better than the first 2.

 

[ProfessorU]

Thanks!