Public Service Announcement on DVX100a

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jefft99

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Shot in 24p Advanced...I'd love your feedback.
www.ivyfilms.org/PSA1.wmv
www.ivyfilms.org/PSA1.mov

(It's extremely compressed)

Also, quick question...when I shoot and blinds or a picture frame, etc., is in the background, occasionally the camera will produce lines that seem to go against the frame...Anyone know how to get rid of that. Anyone know what I'm talking about...

Thanks,

Jeff
 
Well, you have aroused my curiousity. I think that would be the intention. So for me, that counts big. Nice visuals as well.
earon
 
I liked it right up to the end voice-over. I think you should have kept the audio in a whisper like the rest of the spot.
 
VO crashed it for me too at the end. Are you sure those titles are title safe? Look a bit close to the edge. Also -- not sure I accept the fact that there's a movie playing... maybe if it was less obvious that it's actually there. That was the FIRSt image that jumped out as something I could latch onto -- but it wasn't really the walls talking...

I don't know -- maybe I'm just looking to criticize something that was done very well.

Much better than a screaming used car/drug company rep commercial though.

CaptM
 
I liked the visuals but not the whispering voices, especialy the fact that it had delay/echo but I would still go watch movies in that theatre just because of the fact that they took time to get someone to make a PSA.
 
Looks good and listen to what the others said about the whispering voice. yeah, loose the whispering voice. Word!
 
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