Promo video - feedback

[HeyAndy]

Hi,

This is a rough edit of a promo video I have made of an artist (also a client) going through the process of painting a piece.

I was wondering if anyone could watch it and provide some honest feedback. Be critical if you have to.

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xf68w1_rough-edit_creation

I'm aware that there is a gap towards the end of the video. This will be done in later edits/final edit.

I have purposely not colour graded the video. I have decided to leave this at the end of post production.

Thanks

 

[Jon Starr]

It's alright. Not sure what to comment on. It was maybe a tad too long and could be tightened up perhaps? And that gap you've already mentioned.

 

[HeyAndy]

....could be tightened up perhaps?

Is it okay if you could expand on that?

Thanks for the comment anyway.