Project for school

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shermdog219

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I'm a long time viewer of DVXuser since I got my dvx when it first came out, when ever the hell that was. I think the shorts and footage I have seen here is something I strive for. There are really some talented people who post on this forum. Anyfray I thought maybe If anyone got a chance to take a look at a project I did awile back for school. Its kinda long and the acting kinda sucks, and I used shop lights for the lighting because I couldnt bring lights from school over the weekend. Sooooo here it is, let me know if I should stick to bagging groceries.


http://freshmodemedia.com/video/pages/moneyline.html


(the video doesn't seem to work in safari)

sorry its so small too!
 
that was really tight man! better than most stuff i see around on forums i'd say!
colors and lighting were really nice, good production. you said the acting sucks, eh i'd say it's better than most. the only thing i'd say is shorten the beginning, the slow motion stuff is kinda drawn out. i really liked the shot with the guys coming in and the super fast zoom out. keep it up :thumbsup:
 
Thanks TJ I appreciate the feedback. As far as the slow start I wanted the audience to feel the monotony of the characters day to day routine, to feel like come on already, but your right I should have cut it down a bit.
 
I agree w/ what TJ commented about, but nice job mang I really liked the whole "feel" it had.
 
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