Mythfit
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OK made this for class, turning in the rough cut on wednesday so tell me what you think.
https://home.comcast.net/~mythfit/desert3.mov
https://home.comcast.net/~mythfit/desert3.mov
Practice Comercial
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Mythfit
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Re: Practice Comercial
ha your right, forgot to make the music stereo, the sound on the right is some of the original adio I left in, havent decided if I want to pull it out entirly or bump up the engine nosies.
um, ya, I gamma-ed up some of the shots cause I was stupid, it was so bright that the moniter was washed out no matter what I did, should have trusted the z bars but instead I stopped it down and it came out to dark.
ha your right, forgot to make the music stereo, the sound on the right is some of the original adio I left in, havent decided if I want to pull it out entirly or bump up the engine nosies.
um, ya, I gamma-ed up some of the shots cause I was stupid, it was so bright that the moniter was washed out no matter what I did, should have trusted the z bars but instead I stopped it down and it came out to dark.
J.R. Hudson
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Re: Practice Comercial
LOL
Not too bad; I actually kind of dug this; the music was great and added to the 'parody' feel. Personally I wanna shoot someone when I see 4:3 but alas the world hasnt turned into the big widescreen standard yet...
Not bad, a little hot but no worries. Some nice comps and some tight editing. I think this works.
LOL
Not too bad; I actually kind of dug this; the music was great and added to the 'parody' feel. Personally I wanna shoot someone when I see 4:3 but alas the world hasnt turned into the big widescreen standard yet...
Not bad, a little hot but no worries. Some nice comps and some tight editing. I think this works.
Mythfit
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Re: Practice Comercial
Thanks josh that looks good, I'm still working on my color corecting skills though, I'll play around with it.
John- is 4:3 so evil? its ment for tv afteralll =)
Thanks for your comments, makes me feel better, I think its too hard to tell right off that hes pouring the beer into the radiator instead of the water, but I dont have a better shot, oh well its a learning experiance.
The tag line with the product shot is going to be, "Dasani, what's it worth to you?"
Thanks josh that looks good, I'm still working on my color corecting skills though, I'll play around with it.
John- is 4:3 so evil? its ment for tv afteralll =)
Thanks for your comments, makes me feel better, I think its too hard to tell right off that hes pouring the beer into the radiator instead of the water, but I dont have a better shot, oh well its a learning experiance.
The tag line with the product shot is going to be, "Dasani, what's it worth to you?"