I like the simplicity of the first one but a poster without credits is like a commercial that doesn't sell anything.
Unfortunately the credits distract from the subjects in the second one. Could you maybe fade the credits back a little (lower the opacity by 50%)? Or reduce the amount of credits so that it doesn't take up so much space. What about just having "A Dreamsoft Productions Film" at the bottom. Or a website address so people could find the credits online.
Yeah, I think you need the credits in there, but I would change the color of the text to a light olive color or something just so that they don't pop out so much.
I agree with the dude or dudet what suggested just having Dreamsoft Productions at the bottom. The absolute simplicity and loneliness of the title (especially in lower case, nice touch) words perfectly with the choice of photo, and the text detracts from that.
Yeah, I'm with PK and Matt. Just the name of the company or a website. You can use the other poster with the credits at the screenings or whatever. But to suck 'em in, say only what you have to.